Beautiful chaos
Twilight melts into starlight
Violent longing
© Noora (2015)
Haikus are NOT my forte, but I give them a try every now and then. I found this piece while going through my journals.
Beautiful chaos
Twilight melts into starlight
Violent longing
© Noora (2015)
Haikus are NOT my forte, but I give them a try every now and then. I found this piece while going through my journals.
It’s a beautiful haiku, Noora!
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Thank you, Tiny! I have a love-hate relationship with haiku. lol. I enjoy reading them, but I find them challenging to write.
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Lovely, as usual. 😉
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So are you! Thank you, Eva! 🙂
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Beautiful as always ❤
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Thank you, Karen!!! Looking forward to reading you again. ❤
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I love the contrasts – and anything with starlight makes me melt anyway. 🙂
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Glad you enjoyed it, haiku master!! 🙂
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Beautiful and divinely penned dear poet. Exquisitely so! 🙂
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You’re TOO kind, Deborah. Thank you – it means a lot coming from a wonderful poet like you!
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Wow… it’s amazing how you can use so few words and yet say so much.. this is BEAUTIFUL Noora! ❤
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That’s why I enjoy reading them, but as a writer I find the 17-syllable rule pretty challenging. Glad you liked it, Julie!!
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Beautifully written, Noora. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Celestine!!
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Wonderful and beautiful!
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Thank you for the comment, Nicodemas – hugely appreciated!!!
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Beautiful images… The idea of twilight melting is highly metaphorical…
Great one… Sending best wishes. Aquileana 🐉☀️
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Guess what? I’m back!! :)Thank you very much your lovely feedback. I can’t wait to read your recent posts, dear Aquileana.
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I love it! So often the approach of night is painted as calming but you’ve made it passionate.
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I appreciate your feedback hugely. Thank you deeply. I’m sorry it’s taken so long to reply. I didn’t intend to stay away this long.
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Noora I have missed you, you fell from my mail and reader, I have reclicked your follow button in hopes of bringing you back. Lovely poetry as always! ❤
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Aww, Holly! I’m sorry it’s taken so long to reply, but I was taking a break from WordPress – it’s great to be back. Hope all is beautiful in your world!!
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hey noora my friend! its been a while how are you?
i took a break on writing but im writing again.
whats up?
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Hey there! Thank you for stopping by. Life is good! Hope all is well in your world.
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